kitus posted a comment on Thursday 17th January 2013 1:18pm for Chapter 2: Luna's Visit

'Luna nodded hard enough for her radish earrings to sway back and forth'-...is that what they're calling them these days? I never could keep up with all the slang...

'the latter did a better job of holding Harry’s attention.'-well, if the soldier is saluting...

god, she's like a dirtier Katherine Hepburn in "Bringing Up Baby"...this is bloody genius! flighty, flirty, rapid fire banter, good god, I love this story! and even more that there's tasteful naughty bits!

Honestly, yes, I would consider either covering up the version on fanfiction with this one (leaving a link to the clean one at the other site), or adding this in as a "Director's cut/unedited version" like they do these days with most good comedies.

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Friday 25th February 2011 10:01pm for Chapter 2: Luna's Visit

Brilliant, I love Luna.