Testing Defenses :: Chapter 6: Susan's Visit

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kitus posted a comment on Thursday 17th January 2013 2:50pm for Chapter 6: Susan's Visit

minor nitpickiness:

Susan shuttered. -shuddered

, and grimaced when she shifted her weigh. -weight

funny, touching, and even though it ain't my thing, kinda arousing. and banter filled. Either you're a fan of 40's romantic comedy, or the neo-stuff like Lucky Number Slevin (well, the bantering plays like that)...

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Friday 25th February 2011 10:47pm for Chapter 6: Susan's Visit

No Toys-R-Us for Harry. :-)