tcl7189 posted a comment on Saturday 28th April 2018 8:42pm

LMBO.. Great job

K Gibbs Winters posted a comment on Wednesday 26th March 2014 3:36pm

this had me laughing so loud i almost woke the kids :D but that prank from Tonks and Hermione almost had me puking before I realized what was going on... :/

kitus posted a comment on Thursday 17th January 2013 3:15pm

ya know, the length may not be epic, but the story surely is. Thank you for making me laugh my ass off.

kitus posted a comment on Thursday 17th January 2013 3:02pm

Damnit....NICE!

Officially utterly love this story.

kitus posted a comment on Thursday 17th January 2013 2:50pm

minor nitpickiness:

Susan shuttered. -shuddered

, and grimaced when she shifted her weigh. -weight

funny, touching, and even though it ain't my thing, kinda arousing. and banter filled. Either you're a fan of 40's romantic comedy, or the neo-stuff like Lucky Number Slevin (well, the bantering plays like that)...

kitus posted a comment on Thursday 17th January 2013 2:35pm

uh, not to point out a minor plothole, buuuut...if he has access to the bank by his new portkey, how would the debit card be an issue? he can just get the cash directly...

meh.

Love how you take a character who's more or less just a name and flesh her out, so to speak.

Also, random thought from last chapter (or the one before?) Your mention of "John Thomas" reminded me of "The Penis Song" by Monty Python, and I'm curious for your opinion. D'ya think that J.K. may have been subconsciously influenced by slang when she named Percy, as he is kind of a dick?

kitus posted a comment on Thursday 17th January 2013 2:03pm

nice touch with the more "handwritten" font, pity it's not used throughout.

and is it boxers or briefs, as it switches towards the end? or did he just transfigure them? Just curious.

Still loving this.

kitus posted a comment on Thursday 17th January 2013 1:38pm

kay, thanks for rolling the dream into this chapter. better flow.

The Umbridge cameo had me flashing back to good old Beula Ballbricker...dear lord...only line missing there is Wood saying "i'm going in!"

Seriously, loving this!

kitus posted a comment on Thursday 17th January 2013 1:18pm

'Luna nodded hard enough for her radish earrings to sway back and forth'-...is that what they're calling them these days? I never could keep up with all the slang...

'the latter did a better job of holding Harry’s attention.'-well, if the soldier is saluting...

god, she's like a dirtier Katherine Hepburn in "Bringing Up Baby"...this is bloody genius! flighty, flirty, rapid fire banter, good god, I love this story! and even more that there's tasteful naughty bits!

Honestly, yes, I would consider either covering up the version on fanfiction with this one (leaving a link to the clean one at the other site), or adding this in as a "Director's cut/unedited version" like they do these days with most good comedies.

kitus posted a comment on Thursday 17th January 2013 1:03pm

Okay, definitely better than the original. Fun as that was, I do enjoy the witty banter. Seems more in character with Hermoine and Harry, were they real people who were that close.

kd8gun posted a comment on Thursday 6th September 2012 1:49pm

Read the original on FF and have to say you did a damn fine job with the rewrite!

Potter Thinker posted a comment on Wednesday 29th August 2012 8:15pm

Sweet dreams are made of these!

Who am I to disagree!

...can anyone help me finish this in a sexy conotation.

Patches posted a comment on Thursday 10th March 2011 3:16pm

This is a real twist on the usual Harry Potter story. Very well done. I like the fact that Ginny was left out. Quite an interesting group. Thanks for writing a fun fic. I look forward to more of your "epic" stories. I was disappointed in Muggle Summer when I realized it isn't finished. I hope you continue it to the end. You have already done a lot on that story. I would be a shame not to finish it. Thanks for writing. pms

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Friday 25th February 2011 11:02pm

Harry is a lucky S.O.B., no doubt.

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Friday 25th February 2011 10:55pm

Bad Tonks! No doubt she's related to Sirius.

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Friday 25th February 2011 10:47pm

No Toys-R-Us for Harry. :-)

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Friday 25th February 2011 10:38pm

That's our Harry, always the gentleman.

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Friday 25th February 2011 10:26pm

Yay, Sirius! Got to love the old dog.

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Friday 25th February 2011 10:01pm

Brilliant, I love Luna.

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Friday 25th February 2011 9:54pm

Wow, welcome to Fanficauthors. I haven't had the pleasure of reading your work before, I quite like it (and your pen name). Thank you.