By canoncansodoff
Reviews
hpfan123 posted a comment on Thursday 1st October 2015 8:18pm
this story reminds me of a couple of Cloneserpents' stories, speciffically "Sword of Gryffindore" for the overall raunchy humor and use of sex to do things, and "Bibliophile" for the scene where hermione was getting off by having books rubbed against her. since those are some of my favorite stories, that puts this one pretty high on my list. I would have liked to have at least a chapter on the india training, i felt that that part was glossed over too much since some pretty big things happened in india. i would have also liked to have had lisa actually join harry and hermione even if she retained her virgin status, but that is just because i am a guy and get aroused by the thought of 2 girls doing things together.
K Gibbs Winters posted a comment on Wednesday 26th March 2014 11:43am
Holy Fucking Shitballs! That was funny as hell, and hot as fuck!
LuxEterna posted a comment on Tuesday 21st January 2014 12:10pm
you know i wonder why they want to figure the aritmetic of the potency of the sweat out
it would have been far easier to test it out empirically afterall it wouldnt have affected the potency if they decided it wanst good enough...
draco6812 posted a comment on Wednesday 17th April 2013 7:36pm
I like it alot but why do you have to have Mione so prudish....of all the people involved she should be the most open minded, to an actual 3some, i would love to see you continue this and have Lisa eventually join them
kitus posted a comment on Friday 18th January 2013 1:35am
Damn, Just...damn. Hilarious, hot, witty as all get out...did I love this one?
Word-of-the-day.
kitus posted a comment on Thursday 17th January 2013 7:28pm
'what goes on behind the green doors most certainly is.'- is this a reference to the semi-infamous porno of the same name?
kitus posted a comment on Thursday 17th January 2013 6:37pm
*snrks* just finished up the warning...all I can think of is Zoot."...and then, the oral sex..."
*ahem*...wow. just...wow. extremely well written.
and yeah, color it pennance. I ain't into the spanking thing, but the role play bit...so I guess it qualifies? regardless, highly enjoyable.
Hemotem posted a comment on Friday 15th July 2011 2:53pm
An interesting read, it was a bit smutty yet it still holds a plot quite well. I do look forward to seeing more of this to see where the data goes and how high Harry's numbers were and where they are going if up or down depending on the rules of virginity to when the sweat becomes less usable/desirable . I thank you again for an interesting read.
Hemotem
in-fanficauthors posted a comment on Thursday 19th May 2011 9:48am
Great chapters, but I thought one of the things with the magically protective vanishing vagina was that you could almost shag without loosing your status, combining exercise with sexual excitement. That collection step seems to have been missed with Harry.
Please continue.
00_Knight posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd May 2011 12:55pm
Nice bit of fluff, is there more? or is this the end?
gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 24th April 2011 3:02pm
Amusing, very amusing indeed. I would love to learn more about that visit to India of course, but this little piece of (no offence) entertaining nonsense was highly appreciated. I liked how it followed the developing relationship, and i adored that the racier scenes followed the plotline and usually had some kind of point. Of course, in relation to Canon it's further away than Pluto but care of that, those who may.
May Robert Lind in Kramfors bless your keyboard.
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alysarahanelle posted a comment on Friday 4th October 2019 3:25pm